FIC: So Close to My Heart (j2, NC-17) 2/2 : comments.
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I adore every loving word of this. I can see why it was a joy to write.
I could comment on each & every scene and all the detail you put into them, the clever writing and wording. I must have sighed 50 times reading this.
I especially loved that you had Jared decide on his own to stay in Seattle, because he loved what he was doing, not for Jensen. That seemed so right to me.
Oh, and fireworks at the end...lovely.
Thank you so much.
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