posted by [identity profile] asemic.livejournal.com at 07:30pm on 30/09/2006
Did you notice that Ian was totally wearing a white button down Don shirt in the beginning of Two Daughters?

I love the violence that Ian has in him, how engrained danger is in him. I love how you have Don now reacting as Charlie pushes back against Ian. I love how there is a ending that's almost sweet in its execution.

Most of all, I love you for writing this.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:52pm on 01/10/2006
yay, thank you! *g* and I'm so glad you liked the ending! I find it hard to do unhappy, but I was still torn about giving them a private first kiss -- great to hear you thought it worked. *bg*

(and no, I didn't notice Ian's shirt but now I have to go watch the beginning again to see it. hee! They really should be more discreet. Wearing each other's clothes. tsk. )

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