posted by [identity profile] darksybarite.livejournal.com at 10:29pm on 11/12/2006
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so cold... so HAWT!

“Finally get to touch you,” Jen says, hand never still, just feeling him, eyes moving over Jared’s face like he wants to sculpt it later. “Made me wait. All this time, months, and now I’ve finally got you and you made me wait.”

“Uh…sorry?” Jared’s so close he could liquefy, so if Jen wants anything more coherent, he’s going to have to wait until Jared has blood somewhere near his brain again.

Jen’s laugh is low and a little helpless, and the kiss he gives Jared is hotter than the sun. “Forgive you. Just fuck me.”


OK, that exchange, right there encapsulates everything I love about this story.
SCHMOOP ---> FUNNY&INCOHERENT ---> RAW SEX

If this is your first RPS, that means you've written non-RPS stuff, yeah?

<--- off to burrow through your lj
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 04:26am on 12/12/2006
hee! so glad you enjoyed! this is the single schmoopiest thing I've ever written, I think. I'm thrilled you thought it worked! :D

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