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audrarose ([personal profile] audrarose) wrote2006-04-08 11:15 am

Teeny Numb3rs smutlet: Jealousy (Ch/D, R-ish)

Title: Jealousy
Fandom: Numb3rs
Pairing: Charlie/Don
Rating: almost R
Spoilers: for All's Fair
Warnings: incest
Summary: Don needs proof.
Notes: A very short smutlet originally written for [livejournal.com profile] pro_f_iler. Cross posted to [livejournal.com profile] slash_100 for the "jealousy" prompt and [livejournal.com profile] numb3rs_slash.




The one time -- the only time -- that Don visits Charlie while he's living with Susan he leaves Kim sleeping and drives all night; his mother's words playing over and over in his head.

"Your brother's growing up, you know." Said proudly, like this was some big accomplishment on Charlie's part, but Don thinks he won't really believe it until he sees for himself.

When he gets there it's just a little past eight and Susan's already gone, but Charlie's up, answering the door in flannel pants and a t-shirt, his hair hanging in his face. He looks at Don like he thinks he might still be dreaming.

"I need coffee," Don tells him, pushing past into Charlie's -- their apartment -- and looks around the way he'd examine any crime scene. Charlie just shrugs, looks at a Don blankly for a second and then moves into the kitchen, finding coffee beans and cream by rote. Don follows Charlie and thinks maybe their mother might be onto something because Charlie moves differently; un-self-conscious, comfortable in his body in a way Charlie has never been.

Don doesn't see it until Charlie tips his head to measure water into the coffee pot; his hair falling away from the line of his jaw. A shadow-- ink, maybe? Feathering down over the curve of bone beneath his ear, right at the point of his jaw, and Don reaches out to wipe it away.

Then Don knows. He knows in the way that Charlie freezes beneath his touch, in the way Charlie's pulse beats hard and frantic beneath his fingertips.

"Charlie?" he whispers, pressing hard on that mark that he can't wipe away, and when Charlie doesn't answer he grabs Charlie around the waist with one arm and jerks him back against his chest, using his other hand to pull the collar of Charlie's t-shirt away from his neck and tearing the seam over his shoulder.

"Are there more?" Don asks, his words twisting between them while he runs his hand over Charlie's shoulders and lifts his hair; searching, searching, because when he bruises Charlie's skin it's always over his shoulder blades or at the nape of his neck where he smells like vanilla shampoo and tastes salt-sweet.

"I don't --" Charlie's voice is thready. "I don't need to explain myself to you." He's gasping a little and Don's vision goes red.

When he can see again he's tightened his arm around Charlie's waist, pushed Charlie's head forward and bitten down hard on the taut tendon of Charlie's neck. He hears Charlie cry out, feels him squirm, but Don just bites harder and pushes Charlie against the wall where Charlie has to think more about breathing than getting away.

He sucks at Charlie's skin until he hears Charlie moan; until Charlie pushes back against Don's hips, putting pressure just where Don wants it; until Don can taste copper against his tongue.

"Fine," Don hisses against the spreading bruise on Charlie's throat. "You can explain that to her."

End

[identity profile] melissima.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 06:31 pm (UTC)(link)
*^%#%$@#!@#^#@

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We need more Don/Charlie from you, Audra. You write it like nobody else. Guh.

[identity profile] honeyswallow.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 06:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Hm, I'm not sure, but this way it sounds like Charlie has been cheating on Don ;) Of course he technically hasn't, since Don has Kim, but I find Don's arrogance interesting, to think that he could have Kim while his brother is supposed to stay his alone *g*

[identity profile] mojokid.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 07:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, ow. Jealousy indeed. Guh. I love this.

[identity profile] goodbyemyfancy.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 07:08 pm (UTC)(link)
I really love nasty and jealous Don in this one ;) LOVELY!!

[identity profile] nina-ds.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 07:18 pm (UTC)(link)
Still lovin' this. I love it when protective!Don and possessive!Don collide, and he's not sure which end is up.

[identity profile] moon-brain.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 09:33 pm (UTC)(link)
oh YES!

he grabs Charlie around the waist with one arm and jerks him back against his chest, using his other hand to pull the collar of Charlie's t-shirt away from his neck and tearing the seam over his shoulder.

God I can see that in my head and I'm really enjoying it.

That last line has me extrapolating whole spews of stories...what happens next? Is this why they split up? Don's sense of natural possession is impenetrable and it seems that even he doesn't know why. Charlie is HIS no matter what, no matter when. It's a fascinating character trait. Anyway! Loved this; if you decide to continue it, I'll turn a cartwheel for you

[identity profile] byrons-brain.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
hehehehehehe, naughty.... please more....

[identity profile] muiting.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Whoah! This is so sexy and hot without being smutty! I just love JealousDon!

Is there more......?

[identity profile] pro-f-iler.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 10:54 pm (UTC)(link)
"Fine," Don hisses against the spreading bruise on Charlie's throat. "You can explain that to her."

Evil! And brilliant! LOL. There are no words for how much I love this.

::iz ded::

[identity profile] kisskoss.livejournal.com 2006-04-09 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Audra, I want to marry you and have your babies. The...the..the...neck! Biting! Just...omigah! *squirms* I love you!

[identity profile] missmollyetc.livejournal.com 2006-04-10 02:05 am (UTC)(link)
Y'know, it's no fair melting my brain into a puddle of worshipful goo when I'm trying to be a responsible adult! ::loves::

[identity profile] leda_speaks.livejournal.com 2006-04-10 09:20 am (UTC)(link)
Oh *yes.* The biting. The *biting.* Man, that's good.
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[identity profile] twoweevils.livejournal.com 2006-04-10 11:34 am (UTC)(link)
Oh yeah. Love Don marking Charlie like that. And the last line? Score one for Don. Nice.

M.

[identity profile] galadrielriver.livejournal.com 2006-04-11 01:51 am (UTC)(link)
ohhhhh,yeah. Now that's what I'm talkin' about.

Jealous!Don and biting and possessive!Don and...::incoherent babble::

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 03:13 am (UTC)(link)
What a lovely thing to say! Thanks! *hugs*

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Hee! Okay, my thinking here? Don's not being completely rational guy, you know? Not that Charlie should always be his, but Charlie's always been his, and suddenly he's got a girlfriend? Not cool. Don's reacting, not thinking.

(Plus I just love writing possessive Don. *g*)

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 03:16 am (UTC)(link)
Dude, thanks! So glad you liked! *g*

[identity profile] melissima.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
s'Just true. *Hugs*

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-13 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
hee! He probably wouldn't really act that way, but it's sooo much fun to write. Thanks for commenting! *g*

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-22 12:27 am (UTC)(link)
dude. So late, but thanks! *hugs*

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-22 12:30 am (UTC)(link)
hee! crazy late, but thanks! Just for fun, but glad you liked. Don't know if I'll continue this one in particular, but jealous Don is way too much fun to leave alone. And hey, if you write it, let me know! I'd love to see where it goes. *g*

[identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com 2006-04-22 07:49 am (UTC)(link)
*brain fizzles* I... yes, I had a brain once, didn't I?

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-25 01:53 am (UTC)(link)
*G* There will definitely be more jealousDON at some point, b/c yum. *bg* Thanks!

[identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com 2006-04-25 01:54 am (UTC)(link)
hee! Thanks for commenting! (and apologies that it took me ages to answer... *g*)Jealous Don must return at some point b/c he's just too delicious to resist. So glad you liked!

[identity profile] byrons-brain.livejournal.com 2006-04-25 08:29 am (UTC)(link)
I love jealous Don

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