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Title: Jealousy
Fandom: Numb3rs
Pairing: Charlie/Don
Rating: almost R
Spoilers: for All's Fair
Warnings: incest
Summary: Don needs proof.
Notes: A very short smutlet originally written for [livejournal.com profile] pro_f_iler. Cross posted to [livejournal.com profile] slash_100 for the "jealousy" prompt and [livejournal.com profile] numb3rs_slash.




The one time -- the only time -- that Don visits Charlie while he's living with Susan he leaves Kim sleeping and drives all night; his mother's words playing over and over in his head.

"Your brother's growing up, you know." Said proudly, like this was some big accomplishment on Charlie's part, but Don thinks he won't really believe it until he sees for himself.

When he gets there it's just a little past eight and Susan's already gone, but Charlie's up, answering the door in flannel pants and a t-shirt, his hair hanging in his face. He looks at Don like he thinks he might still be dreaming.

"I need coffee," Don tells him, pushing past into Charlie's -- their apartment -- and looks around the way he'd examine any crime scene. Charlie just shrugs, looks at a Don blankly for a second and then moves into the kitchen, finding coffee beans and cream by rote. Don follows Charlie and thinks maybe their mother might be onto something because Charlie moves differently; un-self-conscious, comfortable in his body in a way Charlie has never been.

Don doesn't see it until Charlie tips his head to measure water into the coffee pot; his hair falling away from the line of his jaw. A shadow-- ink, maybe? Feathering down over the curve of bone beneath his ear, right at the point of his jaw, and Don reaches out to wipe it away.

Then Don knows. He knows in the way that Charlie freezes beneath his touch, in the way Charlie's pulse beats hard and frantic beneath his fingertips.

"Charlie?" he whispers, pressing hard on that mark that he can't wipe away, and when Charlie doesn't answer he grabs Charlie around the waist with one arm and jerks him back against his chest, using his other hand to pull the collar of Charlie's t-shirt away from his neck and tearing the seam over his shoulder.

"Are there more?" Don asks, his words twisting between them while he runs his hand over Charlie's shoulders and lifts his hair; searching, searching, because when he bruises Charlie's skin it's always over his shoulder blades or at the nape of his neck where he smells like vanilla shampoo and tastes salt-sweet.

"I don't --" Charlie's voice is thready. "I don't need to explain myself to you." He's gasping a little and Don's vision goes red.

When he can see again he's tightened his arm around Charlie's waist, pushed Charlie's head forward and bitten down hard on the taut tendon of Charlie's neck. He hears Charlie cry out, feels him squirm, but Don just bites harder and pushes Charlie against the wall where Charlie has to think more about breathing than getting away.

He sucks at Charlie's skin until he hears Charlie moan; until Charlie pushes back against Don's hips, putting pressure just where Don wants it; until Don can taste copper against his tongue.

"Fine," Don hisses against the spreading bruise on Charlie's throat. "You can explain that to her."

End

Mood:: 'slightly hung-over' slightly hung-over
There are 50 comments on this entry. (Reply.)
 
posted by [identity profile] melissima.livejournal.com at 06:31pm on 09/04/2006
*^%#%$@#!@#^#@

...

We need more Don/Charlie from you, Audra. You write it like nobody else. Guh.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 03:13am on 13/04/2006
What a lovely thing to say! Thanks! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] honeyswallow.livejournal.com at 06:37pm on 09/04/2006
Hm, I'm not sure, but this way it sounds like Charlie has been cheating on Don ;) Of course he technically hasn't, since Don has Kim, but I find Don's arrogance interesting, to think that he could have Kim while his brother is supposed to stay his alone *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 03:16am on 13/04/2006
Hee! Okay, my thinking here? Don's not being completely rational guy, you know? Not that Charlie should always be his, but Charlie's always been his, and suddenly he's got a girlfriend? Not cool. Don's reacting, not thinking.

(Plus I just love writing possessive Don. *g*)
 
posted by [identity profile] mojokid.livejournal.com at 07:07pm on 09/04/2006
Oh, ow. Jealousy indeed. Guh. I love this.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 03:16am on 13/04/2006
Dude, thanks! So glad you liked! *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] goodbyemyfancy.livejournal.com at 07:08pm on 09/04/2006
I really love nasty and jealous Don in this one ;) LOVELY!!
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:40pm on 13/04/2006
hee! He probably wouldn't really act that way, but it's sooo much fun to write. Thanks for commenting! *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] nina-ds.livejournal.com at 07:18pm on 09/04/2006
Still lovin' this. I love it when protective!Don and possessive!Don collide, and he's not sure which end is up.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 12:27am on 22/04/2006
dude. So late, but thanks! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] moon-brain.livejournal.com at 09:33pm on 09/04/2006
oh YES!

he grabs Charlie around the waist with one arm and jerks him back against his chest, using his other hand to pull the collar of Charlie's t-shirt away from his neck and tearing the seam over his shoulder.

God I can see that in my head and I'm really enjoying it.

That last line has me extrapolating whole spews of stories...what happens next? Is this why they split up? Don's sense of natural possession is impenetrable and it seems that even he doesn't know why. Charlie is HIS no matter what, no matter when. It's a fascinating character trait. Anyway! Loved this; if you decide to continue it, I'll turn a cartwheel for you
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 12:30am on 22/04/2006
hee! crazy late, but thanks! Just for fun, but glad you liked. Don't know if I'll continue this one in particular, but jealous Don is way too much fun to leave alone. And hey, if you write it, let me know! I'd love to see where it goes. *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] byrons-brain.livejournal.com at 09:38pm on 09/04/2006
hehehehehehe, naughty.... please more....
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:53am on 25/04/2006
*G* There will definitely be more jealousDON at some point, b/c yum. *bg* Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] muiting.livejournal.com at 10:32pm on 09/04/2006
Whoah! This is so sexy and hot without being smutty! I just love JealousDon!

Is there more......?

 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:54am on 25/04/2006
hee! Thanks for commenting! (and apologies that it took me ages to answer... *g*)Jealous Don must return at some point b/c he's just too delicious to resist. So glad you liked!
 
posted by [identity profile] pro-f-iler.livejournal.com at 10:54pm on 09/04/2006
"Fine," Don hisses against the spreading bruise on Charlie's throat. "You can explain that to her."

Evil! And brilliant! LOL. There are no words for how much I love this.

::iz ded::
 
posted by [identity profile] kisskoss.livejournal.com at 10:57pm on 09/04/2006
Audra, I want to marry you and have your babies. The...the..the...neck! Biting! Just...omigah! *squirms* I love you!
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 05:20pm on 27/04/2006
you're a doll, kiss! Thanks so much! Biting rocks. *bg*
 
posted by [identity profile] missmollyetc.livejournal.com at 02:05am on 10/04/2006
Y'know, it's no fair melting my brain into a puddle of worshipful goo when I'm trying to be a responsible adult! ::loves::
 
posted by [identity profile] leda_speaks.livejournal.com at 09:20am on 10/04/2006
Oh *yes.* The biting. The *biting.* Man, that's good.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 05:20pm on 27/04/2006
Love biting. Love it. hee! So glad you enjoyed! *g*
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posted by [identity profile] twoweevils.livejournal.com at 11:34am on 10/04/2006
Oh yeah. Love Don marking Charlie like that. And the last line? Score one for Don. Nice.

M.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 05:21pm on 27/04/2006
There's something about marking... just yummy. Glad you liked! *g*
 
posted by [identity profile] galadrielriver.livejournal.com at 01:51am on 11/04/2006
ohhhhh,yeah. Now that's what I'm talkin' about.

Jealous!Don and biting and possessive!Don and...::incoherent babble::
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 05:22pm on 27/04/2006
*g* Thanks so much! Jealousy is so much fun!
 
posted by [identity profile] justabi.livejournal.com at 07:49am on 22/04/2006
*brain fizzles* I... yes, I had a brain once, didn't I?
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 05:22pm on 27/04/2006
hee! Thanks, hon! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] neur0vanity.livejournal.com at 05:05pm on 29/04/2006
Guh... I love.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 12:21am on 30/04/2006
*G* Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] strifechaos.livejournal.com at 10:22pm on 01/05/2006
Possessive!Don is hot. Mmm, lovely job. I really enjoyed reading this and look forward to seeing more of your work in the future. Brilliant ending by the way, perfect touch. *grins* *glomps* *waves*
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 03:18am on 02/05/2006
hee! What a nice thing to say! Thanks!
 
posted by [identity profile] rositamia.livejournal.com at 02:02pm on 07/05/2006
I really like how Don's reaction is such a visceral reaction, gut-deep, w/o thought. He *has* to mark Charlie as his. Real nice.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 10:45pm on 07/05/2006
Thanks! I love marking. *bg* I appreciate the comment! *hugs*
 
posted by [identity profile] emmademarais.livejournal.com at 11:04pm on 08/06/2006
Guh! So hot and possibly the best use of Susan as a plot device ever!

/loves/
/bows before your superior talent/
/wishes she could pull this stuff off/

-Emma
 
posted by [identity profile] m-jadis.livejournal.com at 05:06am on 02/02/2008
I know this is two years old for you, but you have a rare talent. And I'm so lurving Jealous!Don. WOW. Very hot.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 05:12pm on 02/02/2008
what a nice thing to say, hon! thank you! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] mona-may56.livejournal.com at 11:41pm on 21/02/2008
Ok this is very, very late but I wanted to say that I loved this one and your jealous!Don is hotter than Hell ^^
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 10:46pm on 24/02/2008
dude, there is no such thing as late feedback! :DDD I'm glad you liked it; thank you so much!
 
posted by (anonymous) at 04:10am on 05/06/2008
It's great! I love it so much~ Your characters are so vivid!

I wonder if this piece has been translated into Chinese ever. If not, do you mind I translate it and put it into the BBS where our Numb3rs fans write and translate fandoms and discuss them?

It's the website. I am sorry it does not have an English Version.
http://www.mtslash.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=2

Looking forward to your reply! Thanks for your lovely fiction~

My email: heliazhou@yahoo.com.cn
You can also contact with me by email. Have a good day!
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:49am on 04/11/2008
That's so flattering! Thanks for asking, go ahead! :D
 
posted by [identity profile] zooeyrye.livejournal.com at 12:53am on 04/11/2008
0.o

Love!
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:48am on 04/11/2008
yay, thanks! :D

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