ext_3545: Jon Walker, being adorable! (Default)
posted by [identity profile] dsudis.livejournal.com at 03:50am on 20/09/2005
Oh my holy GOD I love this. And you. And this. And welcome to the special hell, lady! Pull up a comfy handbasket! Stay a while!

I love love love the progression of touch, Don all-so-innocently going his knees in front of Charlie, leaning his head against Charlie's stomach. I could feel Charlie's hipbones, your writing was so vivid and spot on and perfect. I love how Charlie caught on so much sooner (and maybe shock doesn't just make a seasoned agent oblivious to his wounds, eh?) and how it took Don so long to work out what he was doing, even as he was doing it. Gorgeous and HOT, my God, the sequel may very well kill me. But I will die happy.

 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 03:34am on 21/09/2005
*bounce* I'm so happy that you liked this -- you have no idea. *bg* Thanks!!

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