posted by [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com at 05:52pm on 17/06/2005
Okay, seriously, the smut? Is so not necessary. Smut is fine, but with fics like this one, who needs smut? It was a beautiful fic - like I knew it would be, I mean, come on, it's from you, right? I love the interaction, the musing, the glimpst into their childhood and into Charlie's head... it was beautifully written, really.

Also, the line that really got to me is the following: "I think at that minute, she would have given just about anything in the world to open that acorn and find a gnome inside for you", I mean, the whole story got to me but that line in particular? Really resonated with me for some reason. I just pictured the scene of this mother who wanted nothing more but give magic to his son, knowing she couldn't and just... wow.

Also also, no seriously? You're looking for a smutty co-author? Well you know what I mean lol
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 08:18pm on 20/06/2005
Oh, you are such a doll and I love you. *bg* I'm so glad that you liked it, hon - and you know, you picked out the scene that really was the big one for me? That happened - my son told my daughter (not even 3 at the time) that there were fairies inside flower buds, and she wanted me to open one and show her. She believed it and wanted it - I could just see it on her little face and I think I would have done anything, anything, anything to make it real. (I told her they were invisible. I just couldn't break her heart, you know?)

Anyway, thank you for your lovely comments - I can't tell you how much I appreciate it. *hugs*

PS The smut eludes me on this one. *g* I need a mentor. :)

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