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posted by [identity profile] katma.livejournal.com at 05:41pm on 17/06/2005
That was just beautiful. The relationship between the brothers was so perfectly illustrated. I loved Don's alternating irritation of and wistfulness for his so-very-different little brother. I was very impressed by the way you showcased how Charlie's growing up was so logical, and how that's both happy and sad--for Charlie and for the people who love him. And this:

"You know,"Don said, his expression distant, "I think at that minute, she would have given just about anything in the world to open that acorn and find a gnome inside for you."
Judging by the look on his face, maybe Don would have, too.

was just perfect. You could just *feel* Don in those lines. So yeah, wow. Great job!
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posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 08:10pm on 20/06/2005
Thank you so much! Don, to me, seems like such a burdened character, does that make sense? I find him just as fascinating as Charlie in so many ways. I'm so glad that you thought the characterization worked! :)
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