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posted by [identity profile] mikou.livejournal.com at 12:19pm on 07/06/2005
The bondage (even vanilla-flavored) ordinarily would have discouraged me from reading. Can't say why it didn't, but I'm very glad I read this. I don't think I can add much to what's already been said. I loved the drawn out sensuosness and the subtle erotic language.

One of my favorite lines: He loves Blair’s shoulders, the hard curves that fit perfectly into his palms, the strength that Blair hides beneath loose flannel. Now Jim feels like it is his secret, too.

I can't really explain why that'smy favorite line except for the intimacy it suggests and how it demonstrates what Jim treasures about Blair.

I thought the pacing was right on target and the end hit the perfect note.
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posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 09:17pm on 08/06/2005
Thanks for giving it a shot! (I'm not really a big bondage fan either, actually. *g*)

Thanks for such nice comments :) - especially about the pacing. I think it would be so grim to have written a PWP that developed too slowly. *bg*
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