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“Okay,” Charlie says, sounding confused, but then he grins, and Don feels the knots inside loosen. He can still make Charlie laugh. He can still make Charlie see him. As long as he can do that, maybe there isn't any place Charlie can go where Don can't bring him back.

I absolutely love that part. I love how you got into Don's head. The description of what Charlie was doing in the elevator, how he paced in a pattern. That was awesome.

I liked what you did with their parents thinking Charlie was autistic because he didn't talk. That was nice. And having Don not really knowing what that was but knowing that everything would be alright if he could still make Charlie laugh, still make him see him.

I love fics and scenes that take place in a small place, an elevator is the most used thing. Because it takes only the two or three people that are in there. You don't focus on the outside rather on the characters themselves. I really liked how you put that in there. I'm putting this in my 'must recommend' pile.

Great Job! Wonderful wonderful.