audrarose

This is, you know, wow. Amazing. I love the slow building intimacy that Jared doesn't even notice till they're jerked out of their own world by others and just the whole mood of everything. And, small thing, but I appreciate that it's Kim who comes round as sort of show representative before he goes, because people are always writing in Kripke as controlling force in Vancouver when he mostly lives in LA and it always niggles at me a little. And you brought in Genevieve! I love that too! But possibly most of all I love the first kiss. Just that was hotter than half the sex scenes I read in fic. It's my personal intense love for the moment before a kiss when both people know it's going to happen and have leant in but haven't actually done touched mouths yet talking there, but that is a fabulous scene.