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posted by [personal profile] tinny at 12:09pm on 30/06/2008
Wow, that was great!

At first I thought Jensen was a lot OOC, so insecure and shy. But then it slowly registered how this accident changed him completely, and removed all his previous cockiness and courage. And you did a great job developing this "unknown" person into Jensen again.

My favorite lines are

"First you hit on his dog, and now this. You're going to burn in hell."

and

if Jensen had learned nothing else, he knew that was a promise that no one on earth could make

So beautifully written.
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posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 09:22pm on 08/07/2008
I'm so happy Jensen's character arc, such as it was, worked for you! Thanks, hon! :D
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