Open Mike Night at the Fremont, part 4/4 : comments.
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I loved the pace of this story, the way you developed the characters and their relationships, and the way the differently themed open mic nights and poems conveyed emotions and set the tone for the story as well.
Jensen's reactions to everything were perfect, and I loved the scene in the hospital where Jared finally pointed out that he had never known Jensen before the crash.
This was so real, and I truly love these boys, and want to know even more about them. =D
*hugs* You did a perfect job, with this story and co-running the community.
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