Open Mike Night at the Fremont, part 4/4 : comments.
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I loved the slow build and the realism of Jensen's hesitance, and the boys' interactions were flawless, not succumbing to romantic clichés but seeming like real conversations from two people just trying to learn each other. My only small criticism is where sometimes you seem to have the boys' names mixed up, although I can appreciate how it would be hard to have a beta go back and catch them all now. It doesn't detract from the stoy, though, just a minor niggle, and totally forgivable in the face of such a beautiful, heartfelt fic. Totally going in the memories - thank you for sharing.
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(and omg, I think I've finally fixed all the mix-ups. eep. *desk*)