posted by [identity profile] ze-pink-lady.livejournal.com at 09:35pm on 24/06/2008
This is actually the only Big Bang I've managed to make it through yet, because it thoroughly gripped me and just wouldn't let me go, even when I don't usually have the patience for epic fics in one sitting. The world you've woven for them is lovely and heartbreaking and so believable, with each of the characters having their own unique voice and quirks that just make it... perfect, really.

I loved the slow build and the realism of Jensen's hesitance, and the boys' interactions were flawless, not succumbing to romantic clichés but seeming like real conversations from two people just trying to learn each other. My only small criticism is where sometimes you seem to have the boys' names mixed up, although I can appreciate how it would be hard to have a beta go back and catch them all now. It doesn't detract from the stoy, though, just a minor niggle, and totally forgivable in the face of such a beautiful, heartfelt fic. Totally going in the memories - thank you for sharing.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:16am on 03/07/2008
Oh, wow, hon -- thank you so much for this! I'm thrilled you thought the dialogue sounded natural, and I'm so very happy you enjoyed it!

(and omg, I think I've finally fixed all the mix-ups. eep. *desk*)

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