Open Mike Night at the Fremont, part 4/4 : comments.
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- I loved Allison's sense of humour and Mike's little comments ("Okaaaay," he heard Mike say. "Thank you, Jared. Improv is rare but encouraged here at open mike night. Who's up now?" This one? Just cracked me up. I can SEE Mike saying "Okaaaay"!).
- Loved how you finish the story with people Jen knew before and his new friends. That's the perfect symbol of how he is finally over the accident.
- I love when the boys both can't believe how lucky they are that someone that gorgeous can accept to go out with them. Mutual admiration is so cute!
- I love Jeff. In general and in this fic in particular. Overprotective!Jeff FTW!
- and I loved everything about the boys together.
Thanks for sharing!! =D
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