audrarose

OMG! #clings to you#

Oh, that absolutely, marvelously brilliant. I just adored this, every second of it.

Your characterizations were so thoroughly lovely (Jared and Jensen in particular, of course, since they're the ones we saw the most of, but all the other characters as well--this definitely felt like a close-knit group of real people living real lives, and I really wanted them all to have their happy ending) and the storyline just kept me enraptured the whole time (AHH I'm so glad we got a happy ending! #hearts#).

This was so fabulously well-done; the writing was top-notch and I was completely caught up in the story and the characters. I love those little bits of detail you put in here--like the very definite, quirky presence of the neighborhood setting (practically another character in its own right) and the way Jared takes pictures--and the tone of the story, the mood you set, was wonderful and layered as well (I love your comedic timing, btw! I LOL'ed so hard at Mike's reaction after Jared's announcement; it was a nice, unexpected little break in the tension).

Anyway, you did a wonderful job on this and you should be proud of it. Thank you for sharing! <333