posted by [identity profile] crystalshard.livejournal.com at 10:59pm on 24/03/2008
This is good. I can believe in the motives behind everything, and your characterisation is near-perfect. (Or, if not, almost exactly what I want to read.) Good spelling, good grammar, well-punctuated.

I shall be keeping an interested eye out for your future stories.
 
posted by [identity profile] audrarose.livejournal.com at 01:24am on 26/03/2008
well, thanks! I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :D

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