they were all well-deserved compliments, dear, I seriously thought, while reading this, that it wouldn't surprise me to find this on a bookshop shelf... and I've read many fanfictions before and never thought this, if I had a publishing job, I would offer you a project XD but I'm not XD sorry ^^ but if you publish something, tell me, I will buy it XD
And your characters were so real and mature, just like they are supposed to be, and there's development and nicely drawn plot that flew magnificently and was entertaining and so damn real ^-^
well okay, I shut up now XD