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ext_16739 ([identity profile] keyweegirlie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2008-02-03 01:23 am (UTC)

Wow, this was so so good. I really loved the slow build up that you took with the relationship. I loved that it seemed like everyone but Jensen knew how Jared felt, and even the little whispers that Erica might know that Jensen felt the same.

Jonah was absolutely adorable and so loving of 'Uncle Jay' and I loved the relationship that the two of them had. And the t-ball glove...oh man, I think you broke me there 'cause I was just so sure that Jared was going to leave...

I really enjoyed Jared and Alona's conversation at the park, I liked that she could tell that Jared was a part of her son's live and that she appreciated him because of that.

This whole thing was just really great, and I'm sorry that it took me so long to finally read it. (then when I was about to comment I had a long distance call I needed to take, but that was ok 'cause I got to reread the last part again.) Would it be alright with you if I friended you? I've read a few of your other fics and really liked them and I'm kinda shocked that I don't already have you friended...

*hugs*
-C-

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