So, I read it again and I needed to add some things.

First, the idea of Jensen as a worried (terrified) dad breaks my heart and I loved the way you described that. Jared is so well written as well and his attraction to Jensen so nicely handled.

I loved Jensen chasing Jonah and Tyler in the jungle-gym and everything else he did with Jonah, he's such a great dad and I'm so glad Jared made sure to tell him that.

Finally, I love how, even though the characters and events are relatively ordinary, you have made them feel so warm and special. I could live in this fic!