ext_1126 ([identity profile] quiet000001.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2008-01-29 08:29 am (UTC)

The pacing of this story is just amazing. Given all the backstory, you might have chosen to start it earlier, like when they first meet, but instead you start two years in and let all of the pieces of backstory spill out and fit together as the story moves towards the critical moments, and it's just perfect.

Except for the whole RPS thing, I think it'd make a good movie. (Maybe we could change the names and then convince Jared and Jensen to take the parts... ;) )

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