ext_40096 ([identity profile] iwwfw.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2008-01-28 10:43 pm (UTC)

I think I need a cardiologist to do something about the way my heart is beating. It's pounding and there's this warmth just growing in my chest. There were times when my heart actually stopped and I might have held my breath too.

This was just the loveliest thing I've read. I love the pure emotion and want behind every scene, every word. I love how absolutely the little boys are little boys, and Jensen is the dad who's trying to do right by his kid and still has fears that he's not good enough. I love how much Jared wants him, them, all of it and how he finally gets it. This was absolutely perfect in its execution. Who knew that a tiny 5-word prompt could lead to something so gorgeous.

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