I can't tell you how much I love this. I love the story, I love the writing, I love how very real it all is on every level.

But this line --

Jared always wondered if it was wise to let strung-out, exhausted type-A's have their nervous breakdowns four stories above the ground,

...this line is brilliant. Absolutely, brilliant.

Really, really love it. Really.
Also, change the names and it could be scripted into an awesome movie of the week.