ext_16564 ([identity profile] wendy.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2006-12-16 04:19 pm (UTC)

*happy sigh* I love this story so much, AS YOU KNOW.

Love drunk, goofy Jensen and I love Jared being protective and just...wanting so much. Love the conversations about zipping up the coat.

“Jen. I – I want you in bed. My bed. I pictured us like that…”
Love so much that Jared has imagined this and that he confesses that to Jensen. I love that he wants the reality to match his dreams.

“Finally get to touch you,” Jen says, hand never still, just feeling him, eyes moving over Jared’s face like he wants to sculpt it later. “Made me wait. All this time, months, and now I’ve finally got you and you made me wait.”
LOVE this bit. It makes my stomach all quivery inside.

Jared hears himself moan, buries himself in one smooth, motion, and it’s hot and perfect and not enough, so he just covers Jen’s body, pushes him down into the mattress and falls with him so they’re locked together, every part of them touching. Better, so much better; he can kiss Jensen now, mouth his jaw, twine their fingers together and nudge Jen’s bent leg higher with his knee so they can… move. Together. Urgent, drugging rhythm that builds and builds until he comes with a force that rocks the bed and his mind and maybe the whole god-damned world.
That? That is pretty much PERFECT. *happy sigh*

Sorry for all the long quotes, it was so hard to pick!!

I love the boys in this and all their feelings and fumbling and neediness.

I pretty much love YOU too. MWAH! *snuggles*

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