Oh god, that is hot! And you've just got the perfect mix of tension and schmoop. I loved this fic from start to finish.
I just tried to look over it again quickly so that I could find my favourite bits to quote, but then I ended up getting so caught up that I read the entire thing again. If I took the time to note everything, I'd probably end up copying and pasting over half the fic, but this is one part (of many) that I especially loved:
“Oh, God -- come over here,” he breathes, tugging Jen closer. He’s wondering wildly if he should take this slowly, if he’s even capable of that, but then like a miracle, Jen just falls into him. He gets it all – legs and hips and hard chest, ice-cold fingers shoving his hat off and digging into his hair to pull his face down, and then, oh, God, Jen’s mouth again.
I just love how very tactile this fic is. You describe the sensation of touch so well, and create extremely vivid images at the same time. Perfect. <3<3 *adds to memories*
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I just tried to look over it again quickly so that I could find my favourite bits to quote, but then I ended up getting so caught up that I read the entire thing again. If I took the time to note everything, I'd probably end up copying and pasting over half the fic, but this is one part (of many) that I especially loved:
“Oh, God -- come over here,” he breathes, tugging Jen closer. He’s wondering wildly if he should take this slowly, if he’s even capable of that, but then like a miracle, Jen just falls into him. He gets it all – legs and hips and hard chest, ice-cold fingers shoving his hat off and digging into his hair to pull his face down, and then, oh, God, Jen’s mouth again.
I just love how very tactile this fic is. You describe the sensation of touch so well, and create extremely vivid images at the same time. Perfect. <3<3 *adds to memories*