Someone wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2006-12-11 06:23 pm (UTC)

This is so cute and funny and sweet and tender and abso-frickin'-hot!
Your word choices gave rise to beautiful visual imagery as well (see: "snow-globe of a city"--brilliant!).

Just a superbly written story, I can't believe it's your first RPS!

Well done.

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