Oh no the non-con was shiny and fantastic and GUH OMG!! Hot and tight and just... I could feel the creases of their clothes they were so... *THUD* I think in my spasmed squee/yelling you may have misunderstood me. This is really rilly good. Like painfully good. Want. More. Want. More. NOW.

I didn't even register the clif-hanger warning. Well actually we can blame my roommate for that. SHE didn't tell me it was a cliff hanger! She was just all "Vampire fic! You'll love it!" And I do! And then it... iT... OVER! And *pain* and I'm going to kill lierdumoa... maybe... she's a good roommate and cook. But gah cliff hangers when there hasn't been any good vampire fic since x-files!!! (Buffy doesn't count, they were canon.) And there was molesting and mind-fuckery and... *flails* Everything a dark little fangirl could love!

Do you need help? A beta perhaps? *innocent look* I'm good with characterization and particularly good with the evil and the making things uncomfortably dark. Just ask justabi. *g*