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it only hurts when i breathe ([personal profile] spikedluv) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2005-10-17 06:49 pm (UTC)

I'm back, I'm back! And look what I found!!!! *dances happily*

This story was delicious! I adore how you write Charlie, like you can see right into him. I liked their talk, allowing us to see Don's fear for Charlie, and Charlie's need to be connected to the real world, aka Don. And the smut was so sweet and hot and lovely! *dies*

My first thought is, plot, we don't need no stinkin' plot!, but I get the impression that plot-having means you might be writing more in this little series you've got going, so, yay, plot! *g*

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