ext_8536 ([identity profile] sori1773.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2005-09-24 06:28 am (UTC)

Where do I start...?

He slicks his too-long hair back and Don wonders how long Charlie’s been his template for attraction.

OMG. Slicked hair, SHIRTLESS...!!

Instead, now Don’s kissed him, nearly killed him.

Gorgeous, perfect angst that makes me want to weep.

Charlie must feel it, too, because at the last second he pulls their faces together and lets Don come with Charlie’s tongue in his mouth.

*DIES* (No, really, that KILLED me!)

Gorgeous! I love the atmosphere you've created - angsty and sensual with very real, subtle humor (math groupies!!). Loved it! *bg*

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