audrarose

His mother’s eyes had been joyful but serious, focused on him not his brother, he’s yours, Donny, you need to take good care of him; and maybe she’d read that in a book somewhere, a way to alleviate sibling jealousy, but he knows she believed it and he knows he did, too.

For your first excursion, you went right to the heart of the matter! In addition to all the Don angst (my favorite kind), the lovely description, and semi-public expressions of not only inappropriate but illegal affection, I loved the touch of humor at the end. Yes, I'm sure Charlie's driving is just what Don needs right now. Frankly, I think they should take a taxi.

the sequel - Resolution - should be finished in the next couple of days, if anyone's interested. *g*

I'm glad to see this has been treated with the disdain which it deserves...