Sweet, not sure about fluffy! There's a melancholy edge there, from Larry's POV that even the happy ending doesn't quite assuage. Makes it nicer, IMO. I like lemon and salt better than sugar and cream anyway.

I'll admit it - I have a hard time seeing Charlie/Larry. I see where others can see it, but it doesn't work for me. The chemistry seems to be of a different type. This is the first C/L fic I've read that made it work for me. (That's the second story this ficathon that made me believe a pairing I don't believe in for the duration of the fic, and believe me, I'm not that easy.) I'm not sure whether to thank you for that or not!

And wheee! Don/Charlie to come, because really, that's where the chemistry takes me...pulls me...drags me...