posted by [identity profile] castalie.livejournal.com at 08:15pm on 17/07/2005
God, each time you write something, it blows my mind! I might have one hell of a crush on your writing style, just so you know *g*

I love your characterisation, the voices are spot-on and I'm reading the story and it's so Jim and Blair! It's them and it's just perfect. The angst was wonderfully executed and made me ache for Blair but for Jim too. I imagined him trying to reach out to Blair and always finding himself alone and when Blair finally decided to follow Jim, I could have kissed them both - and, well, you for making it happen *g* Speaking of that scene, the whole sitting-between-a-lover's-legs-leaning-back-against-chest is a favourite position of mine - it always looks so sweet and tender *g*

And the sex? Was hot and sexual beyond the telling of it.

So all in all, a wonderful piece of writing - then again, of course it is, it's yours *g*

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