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it only hurts when i breathe ([personal profile] spikedluv) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2005-07-16 03:22 am (UTC)

Ah, okay, I made you think about them. Well, that's good. Right? *g*

And can I just tell you again how much I enjoyed this story? I see I wasn't the only one to recognize the first bit. And do you know why that is? Because it was a damned fine bit of writing; the imagery was amazing! I felt like I was slogging through the snow with them.

I loved and hated in equal measure finding out that Blair had had a chance to have a relationship with Jim and he wasn't ready, and now that he was, he thought the offer had been taken off the table. Ouchies.

And poor Blair! Feeling all guilty about taking Jim's innocence, lol! No, really, I felt bad for him, but Jim getting excited by it, and Blair being able to joke about it later was so...wonderful.

And how much did I love and adore Jim? So damned much! I loved how he smiled at Blair and made him sleep, and how he had Blair read to him (and do the voices, lol), and how he offered Blair more, and this time Blair was smart enough to accept.

And the smut. I died.

And then Blair's sleepy humor, with the voices, lol, and being delusional. *snorfle*

I *heart* your storytelling ability this much. *spreads arms really wide*

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