carodee.livejournal.com ([identity profile] carodee.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2005-07-15 06:11 pm (UTC)

You are a sneaky sneaker! *admires your slippery ways* Virgin, indeed. *g*

It would have been so easy; just a simple step forward at a time when every word, every touch, every move Jim made had said share my bed, share my life. But he hadn't been brave. He had pretended not to feel the warm weight of Jim's want encircling him like a blanket, and had even half-convinced himself that he was relieved when it slipped away.

Love the poignancy and regret in this.

The sex scene was slow, tender, vivid and hot! Perfect to take the taste of missed opportunities away.


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