ext_109387 ([identity profile] jelsemium.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2005-05-30 11:11 pm (UTC)

Bravo!

I really love this story. The interaction between the three of them was lovely. (I especially liked Don worrying about Terry shooting holes in the ceiling just to make sure they had enough oxygen.)

The business with "The Look" is excellent. Even when it's admiring, it still treats Charlie like an outsider. I'm glad Don doesn't respond to it any more. (Would have been nice to see Terry's thoughts on Don's non-reaction, though)

Favorite line is still: "I just know better than to play cat’s cradle with someone who can do fractal geometry in his head."

I was wondering if you would be so kind as to post it in my Numb3rs_Gen_Het community, too. Please? I'll write a ficlet featuring your favorite character if you do. :-)

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