ext_19577 ([identity profile] whisp.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2008-07-02 09:04 am (UTC)

Oh, that was so beautiful. I loved those last few paragraphs - that quote was such a perfect way to end the fic. I'm still wiping away tears.

The mix of humour in this fic was so awesomely timed. I cracked up so hard when Jared said his piece at the open night, oh and Mike's reaction - lol. And I LOVED Jared running into Jeff while he's walking around half-naked in their apartment. I can totally see the look on Jared's face when he's saying 'awkward'.

You have such an amazing gift for description and imagery. I don't think I've ever had such an incredible longing to see a sculpture from it's description alone.

Thanks for sharing this story with us!

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