wow, totally amazing fic. It's very different from what I expected from the prompt I read for artist claiming, and it was much better than I imagined. The story was interesting and complex, and extremely realistic. I'm impressed how much story you told in that number of words, and still have such amazing detail and description.
Jensen and Jared were awesome of course.. I think my favorite part was Jared saying he never met the old Jensen, he loved the one he knew now... and Jensen finally getting it that he didn't have to try and be that person from before, and just letting Jared love who he is now....
There are SOOO many more things I want to say about it. There about 30 lines that are my absolute favorite lines... I couldn't possibly choose!
I love your use of light and heat, and the imagery you conjure up, I really feel like I can see and smell and hear and feel the way the characters do.
I'm not sure if you have an art background or not, but I loved how you worked in a lot of details about art, and the way you described Jared's sculptures. I could really see them and feel what he was trying to create.
Loved your characterization of the supporting cast. We don't interact much with Mike, but he's still such a vivid character from his comments... and Allison, she's great, I'd like to have her for a friend!
OK, I need to stop rambling here, but I just wanted to try and get the ideas down... WOW. I need to read more of your stuff.
And this is the first bigbang fic I've read... the one I'd been waiting for and now that mine is finally posted, I can check out some of the others...
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Jensen and Jared were awesome of course.. I think my favorite part was Jared saying he never met the old Jensen, he loved the one he knew now... and Jensen finally getting it that he didn't have to try and be that person from before, and just letting Jared love who he is now....
There are SOOO many more things I want to say about it. There about 30 lines that are my absolute favorite lines... I couldn't possibly choose!
I love your use of light and heat, and the imagery you conjure up, I really feel like I can see and smell and hear and feel the way the characters do.
I'm not sure if you have an art background or not, but I loved how you worked in a lot of details about art, and the way you described Jared's sculptures. I could really see them and feel what he was trying to create.
Loved your characterization of the supporting cast. We don't interact much with Mike, but he's still such a vivid character from his comments... and Allison, she's great, I'd like to have her for a friend!
OK, I need to stop rambling here, but I just wanted to try and get the ideas down... WOW. I need to read more of your stuff.
And this is the first bigbang fic I've read... the one I'd been waiting for and now that mine is finally posted, I can check out some of the others...
Lovely!!!!!