audrarose

Wow. This fic was amazing. I really liked the pace of it. Not too slow, not too fast. And Jensen's healing seemed realistic. He wasn't just all the sudden better. I have to say though, my favorite part was this:

Jared decided to be cautious. "I think I liked the other one better. The woman who doesn't believe in anything."

Allison crossed her arms. "Alix Olsen?" she said, considering. "Okay, snaps for digging the radical feminist hardline, and the impression I'm going for here is definitely think-y and deep... but I thought maybe I'd go for something with with less of an edge?"

I had to go back and read that again. I was so surprised to see someone reference Alix Olson. I love her, she's so awesome. I thought it was particularly funny that Jared said she doesn't believe in anything, seeing as she has a poem called 'I Believe'. I was wondering which of her poems Allison read for Jared. ^_^

Over all, such an amazing fic. The scene in the hospital was so heartbreaking, I could physically feel my stomach twisting and my heart hurting.

XOXO
~Malinda