ext_16835 ([identity profile] misty-writes.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] audrarose 2008-06-24 10:45 pm (UTC)

Okay, so I left a comment but it was stupidly short and this story definitely deserves more. Your plot is wonderful. I love how it's so simple and sweet and true to life. JARED was completely made of awesome. I loved how he cared so much about Jensen and wasn't afraid to let him know when he was being a coward. I love that he didn't give up on Jensen. And Jensen. Sweet, fabulous Jensen. His backstory was so sad and just made me ache. :( You captured his fear about living life again very well, and I loved the ending. I loved that Jensen didn't just up and agree to go to Boston right away, because that would have been a stretch to me after all this, but that he promised he'd meet Jared there. Utter perfection. ♥ Absolutely lovely story. I don't read Jared/Jensen very often, but I started this and I couldn't stop. :) My only criticism would be that you have Jared's name mixed up as Jensen's in a few places, but other than that, lovely work.

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