Oh...*claps* I finally had to give up last night and go to bed, but the first thing I did LJwise today was get over here and finish reading this. ;)
I loved this story...the pacing was amazing and the complexity of Jensen's character was just wow. I adore that Jared just fell for him and through that Jensen realized he was strong enough to not just love again, but to actually live again and that was just awww.. Plus I love that Jensen sent Jared to Boston without him, but promised that he'd meet him there. It showed that Jensen really did have the confidence and strength to overcome his phobia by himself if he really tried. And that small glimpse into what their lives were like during the last year together...the pictures of DC and the way that Steve and Chris/Becca are back in the fold as Jensen and Jared's friends...I like that.
You do realize that with the ending that you wrote...
"'There will come a time when you believe everything is finished,'" Jensen said. Then he looked up to see the faces he loved in front of him and the city lit up like a promise, with the black sky spreading above it all like something he could fly into. He smiled.
"'But that will be the beginning.'"
...that I'll be one of the numerous people that'll ask you for more of these two now though, right? Maybe a little time stamp about what their first year together was like, or what happened when Jensen finally went to Boston...or a silly story about the horrible way that Jared always take photographs. ;)
Ok, I'm rambling now so I'm gonna shut up now. Fabulous story though Sweetie. ♥
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I loved this story...the pacing was amazing and the complexity of Jensen's character was just wow. I adore that Jared just fell for him and through that Jensen realized he was strong enough to not just love again, but to actually live again and that was just awww.. Plus I love that Jensen sent Jared to Boston without him, but promised that he'd meet him there. It showed that Jensen really did have the confidence and strength to overcome his phobia by himself if he really tried. And that small glimpse into what their lives were like during the last year together...the pictures of DC and the way that Steve and Chris/Becca are back in the fold as Jensen and Jared's friends...I like that.
You do realize that with the ending that you wrote...
"'There will come a time when you believe everything is finished,'" Jensen said. Then he looked up to see the faces he loved in front of him and the city lit up like a promise, with the black sky spreading above it all like something he could fly into. He smiled.
"'But that will be the beginning.'"
...that I'll be one of the numerous people that'll ask you for more of these two now though, right? Maybe a little time stamp about what their first year together was like, or what happened when Jensen finally went to Boston...or a silly story about the horrible way that Jared always take photographs. ;)
Ok, I'm rambling now so I'm gonna shut up now. Fabulous story though Sweetie. ♥
*hugs*
-C-